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Beneath it all it's Hell
Within it all its life
Above it all it's Heaven
Without all of that we are really just drifters
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When you take all the thoughts of heaven hell and earth out of mind. We may very well just be drifters carried by the air.
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sometimes you make me feel dump,
DAMN RIGHT! :D
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Mood: Relief *HanOneSail Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you, thank you :D
glad I am not the oddball out here.
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~wearethemeta117 Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like this one. for some reason it helps me reflect on life. thank's for posting it.
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Mood: Artistic *HanOneSail Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, that's the idea of 4 liners.
Often I end up trying to write one and it turns into a normal poem.
So it is challenging to make one that won't make me do that.
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